Dont Spoil the PlotDon't Spoil the Plot!He sighed and glanced around him as the fabric of space warped around him. Suddenly, the forest of autumn leaves gave way to the blackness of space. There were tiny points of light in the pitch blacknesstwinkling stars blanketing the darkness. He looked up at a central point where it seemed time and space itself collided and formed into one being. The being before him was something incomprehensible. No word in any language could described this being's form. It simply just existed. However, the being's incomprehensible form was hidden in a
Is Jon a Sue?Case of Mary Sue...Jonathan LongAlright, since we've looked at Kiryuu, let's look at Jon. Does Jon have that Sue quality?So, let's once more review what a Sue is.According to the Protectors of the Plot Continuum, a Mary Sue is a pet character that the author exempts from realism and/or rules that otherwise govern a fictional world. The more the author exalts this "darling" at the expense of the rest of the story, the more of a Mary Sue the character becomes. Mary Sue is impervious to failure and resistant to all in-story attempts at criticism and humiliation; any attempt at an external critique provokes an authori
Mary Sue...Kiryuu KnightThe Case of Mary Sue...Kiryuu KnightApparently I have been accused of writing Mary Sues in my story. I need to do something in complete defense of that. First and foremost, I do not write Mary Sues. Some of the characters may sound a little on the Sue-side, but that is only because you have not read the material and are going by what you see in the artwork. The artwork sometimes, but rarely reflects what goes on in the stories. As in the main character has a much broader range than what is seen in the image. The Sue name calling tends to be placed upon Kiryuu Knight, but Jon
Interesting indeed.
Its so irresistibly amazing. It looks like girls would faint the moment they look at his handsome face.
Go Mr. Squishy!